Thursday 19 January 2012

Feedback

Mr Jones asked the whole class to go to different peoples articles and write our opinion of it on a seperate peice of paper.


Here is what was written for mine:


-I like the title and how you've described her background clearly and how you've gone into detail about her life and the sentences we're put together well.


-I like the interviewer's reactions in the questions.


-I thought it was great how you introduced artists from the real music industry e.g. Harry Styles.

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